Mike Mammone’s “Life As A Story”:
Essay #3 Life As A Story

I chose this peer review example because I feel that It shows my ability to break down my peers writing and point out areas of interest. Over the semester we have been practicing peer review by engaging in group peer review and having an in depth conversation on what was good or bad in our papers.  A specific example from my peer review was  “Add a little bit more to really concrete the ideas you have used to finish your essay”. This example gives the author an idea of what readers think about there writing and gives them a suggestion on how to fix the problem. His conclusion needed a little bit more juice to really wrap up his paper strongly.  I know my peer reviewing skills have grown because I haven’t seriously peer reviewed before this class. After 3 different rounds of essays, peer review has become increasingly more comfortable.