My goal for the revision of this paper will be to create a flowing piece of text that is easy to understand and relays the points that I am trying to make clearly. At the moment the rough draft is a little mixed up and needs more focus to become a better piece of writing. The biggest step in my revision process will be global edits and reshaping some of my ideas to make them more clear to the reader. Global edits will allow me to see the overall shape of the essay and help me reconfigure the piece to how I want it. Local edits will be done after and carry less weight. I will wait until all my ideas are in place before fixing sentence structure. The biggest challenge I run into during revision is looking to see if my writing makes since chronologically. Sometimes when writing you can slip up and put an important idea out of place, the hard part is finding out where it should really go. If I find a challenge that is too hard for me to figure out on my own I will rely on my resources like the Little Seagull or use the internet to help guide me. Overall the revision process is the most important process to make your paper into a great one.